[chris_]

大家好，我第一次玩影相＠＠，請大家多多指教。

呢Ｄ相係我影架用ｄｃ仔 Canon A640，請大家作出指點，有咩要注意可以嗎　＠＠？
http://s121.photobucket.com/albums/o219/kahei_/123/



順帶係度問下：
本人買左部 ｄｃ仔 Canon A640，但係發覺影人像景深唔夠(即係人清個景想模糊），但係影出黎之後覺得個景唔夠模糊，我睇左好多文章之後大約明白原因所在，所以我想問下，如果我加左 Canon TC-DC58N 58mm 1.75x，咁影人個時人清景模糊個效果會唔會更佳？呢枝鏡實際用處係咩？，如果真係加左有咩好處唔好處？？？
鏡頭資料：http://www.dcfever.com/showroom/sp.php?productID=329




謝謝大家
超初心者一名

[司馬公子]

留意平衡感/
可嘗試用不同曝光看看效果/
構圖一般/
相片沒太大感覺(除150和71外)
希望不會太狠吧!我也是學徒已.....
^_^

[chris_]

不同曝光看看效果呢樣唔明@@


構圖一般 <-----------我都覺 = =

[pongyee]

全部夜景，現場光，冇人物，冇題目，觀賞者只可以從構圖著眼。

圖 73 與 75 相同，曝光不同，勾勒得了輪廓，中央的便過度了，可見 ps 還是有需要的。

圖 103 的貓兒太小了，隱沒在一堆石中，不能吸引讀者的目光。

拍攝前，先問一下想告訴讀者什麼事，例如現場應是同一地方，那末，這一組相想說一個什麼故事呢？

夠狠未？

你可以還拖，指出我的錯處對我有益。

[pongyee]

漏了一件事，圖 145 是斜拍的，可免則免。

除非你想拍一幀詭異的照片，但作為一組相，跟其他的脫了節。

[呀超]

新手，作品只是一般，暫時都沒有甚麼評語可言！多觀察人家的作品。

[NAT90]

簡單一句,"根本連你想影咩我地都唔知" XDDDD

試下d影下 例景 or 集中d影一件事物或者物件

[chris_]

多謝大家狠評我會努力　謝謝大家

[tam_dominic]

All photos are exposed correctly.
There is no blur image. All are quite sharp and acceptable.
All are good considering they are shot at night with limited light.


The following are a few basic criteria to make a good photo.

1. What is the main objects of the shot ?

2. Is the main object placed at 1/3 point ?

3.Can the main object attract the viewers at first sight ?
Is there contrasting color, shape, dark and bright, content to catch viewers' eyes.

4. Is there any detracting objects (not useful objects) which can be removed ?

Let me take img_0021 as an example :

1. Old ruined construction

2.Which part of the construction(main object) is of most interest to viewers ?
Put that at one of the 4 1/3 place.
Pls don't say the whole construction are equally important.

3. Now the entrance caught my eyes at the first sight because it is the brightest part with darkest wall . Is this your main object ?

4. The top 1/6 is not useful to bring out the construction. Remove it completely. The top right spot light is also detracting therefore better discard it.

Try comment your photos by yourself one by one and you'll be improving right away.

Happy shooting !

[spina]

繼續努力啦......
=.=!

[呀超]

下次唔須貼太多，兩張就夠喇，講解一o下你的構思，努力！^__^

[chris_]

多謝最新3位比既意見

tam_dominic thx you ^0^

[sky101]

唔錯呀，幾好。

[mattku1231]

你 d 作品真係好正 ！幾時教下我？