[hylee]

影得好唔好
都比下小弟意見啦!
Thanks!

http://dcfever.com/photosharing/viewphoto.php?category=5&view=text&photoID=128482



http://dcfever.com/photosharing/viewphoto.php?category=5&view=text&photoID=128485



http://dcfever.com/photosharing/viewphoto.php?category=5&view=text&photoID=128487



http://dcfever.com/photosharing/viewphoto.php?category=5&view=text&photoID=128489

[Excalibur0991]

照片似乎欠缺主題, 較為平淡.

繼續努力

[tam_dominic]

Taking photo is a reduction process.
Focus on the object you select and exclude/remove other unhelpful objects from your frame.

Your exposure is right and images are sharp.
In my humble opinion, basing on the reduction process concept, I suggest :

http://dcfever.com/photosharing/viewphoto.php?category=5&view=text&photoID=128482
Remove the 18%


http://dcfever.com/photosharing/viewphoto.php?category=5&view=text&photoID=128485
Remove the left 20%


http://dcfever.com/photosharing/viewphoto.php?category=5&view=text&photoID=128487
Remove 60% from the top


http://dcfever.com/photosharing/viewphoto.php?category=5&view=text&photoID=128489
Remove 40% on the left.

Happy shooting !

[john1333]

WAY TOO CONTRAST.

GO RE-SHOOT THEM!

DO IT AT AN EALIER TIME OF THE DAY. LIKE DUSK START.

[Martin@SEPHIROT]

My little opinion:
take 128485 as example.

The picture itself is ok, but the theme doesn't stand out well.

If you plan to do a re-shoot, you should:
think how do you feel about TKO or what feeling does it give you. "A good picture should be full of feelings".

technically you should:
use longer exposure time to record more moving light from traffic.

choose another time of day to take the picture. If there's still some light in sky will be better. I suggest you catch the magic hour(around 1 hour before sunset). At that time, the color of the sky should be wonderful and the street should also be busy enough for you to capture more light of traffic.

use a tripod for long exposure.

Hope you will think this useful.

Happy shooting! Hope to see your new picture soon!

[darrenhon]

一幅靚,清楚既相並唔等於一幅好相.影相最難學既唔係d硬既技術,而係個藝術元素.有時仲會故意令幅相唔清楚或故意偏差個色調,先至有好效果.
曝光控制得唔錯.但欠缺主題,構圖很沉悶.
在128485中,下方的街道空無一人,上面果條街就有人,可以zoom埋去上面,或者等多d人同車先.因為影街景除非你想突出個孤寂感,如果唔係路人同行車可以大大豐富個畫面.
通常影一幅相都有一個你想表達既主題,有助突出對主題既就收佢入畫面裡面,無用果d就移走佢或者換個角度影.唔好見到有d野好似幾靚就拿拿聲拎部機影左佢.花d時間同心思諗下點構圖.
128489遠處果款公屋通常都有一個特色,就係d走廊好光但係一個人都無,如果用佢黎做主題影出黎應該唔錯.
有時一個影像用肉眼去睇覺得幾好,影左出黎個感覺完全唔同晒.譬如你望落條街度好似幾靚咁,但係你未必會知一條空晒既街同個空晒既天會點破壞張相.
影相就係一噤個快門之後影像就永遠停留,一d平時唔顯眼既野可以破壞晒成個構圖.所以影相既時候嘗試從部相機既角度去睇野,會突然間睇多好多野.
初時影相真係好難觸摸,唔知點解睇人地影既相好有feel,好震撼,但係自己果d相明明已經影得好靚,但係又無乜feel.多d睇d攝影大師既出品,尤其是黑白作品,對培養呢方面既觸覺好大幫助.
以上只係小弟一d經驗同心得,希望可以幫到你.