i like the idea u want to express, but the main theme (yourself) not too outstanding & it's too dark to let the reader seeing what it is. ^O^　

Hey! Cheer Up !

I know U're trying hard to do it !

Come On ! Don't give Up so Soon !

Start it up again !

You got some good ideas in fact, But Need more TIME to get the right elements.......Lighting, explosure, composition, angle, and the most Important ----What do you "want to tell" by yr PHOTO. What is the Main theme?

O.K.! Don't worry ! It may take some time for u to try, Keep it up ! I can see yr Sense in Photo ! Don't let yr talent slip thru' yr finger !!! I believe that U can DO IT !



阿達.^o^

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