hi, kenny
the picture LOOK TOO FLAT
we don't get any love feeling and japanese feel, because of the picture are too dark, we just can found some object in the picture, but can not regarniae what is it.
so i think you can make whole picture a little bit brighter or get close to take the object (as you say japanese feel) let people know what you want to telling us about. and making A THEME of the picture.
sorry about my bad english and i'm a mac user (can't type chinese) and hope you don't mind my opinion.