Hi Sahara
Nice try, but little bit off-focus or
camera-shack. Also try not to have
your subject competiting with background. Personally, I love flower
photo in color.
For example
http://www.dcfever.com/photosharing/viewphoto.php?photoID=35767
http://www.dcfever.com/photosharing/viewphoto.php?photoID=36508