Thanks to all your compliment. I am using fuji film. I will try to knee down next time! Thanks you!

the dynamic range of film would not allow proper exposure of both face and should. It is acceptable I think to over exposure certain part but correctly expose the face. There was a big crowd and I understand it is almost impossible to knee down:)

What film used?

Could be better if her left shoulder is not over-exposed and shoot from a lower angle e.g. kneeling down instead of standing up (I'm guessing).