I like your style generally. As far as this photo is concerned, I think it is aesthetically nice but not powerful enough.
P.S. - Further (I think Hong Kong people generally will not agree), unlike traditional Chinese painting, signing a photo or writing any feeling/poem on a photo are generally considered bad taste (or expressed politely by some as "not a good taste"). In fact, most people consider that naming a photo will only serve to degrade it -- I say this here because I think your photos deserve better treatment - hope you don't mind.