Nice trial! As I've had 2 similiar sets in B/W before, please let me share a bit here. It seems that you did not put a fill light on the right face, or the ratio was very different on both sides; I personally think this "big" contrast is always fit to boys better, I apply most likely as 2:3 to girls usually

nice photo

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very nice!!